Too many ands and thens. |
the two boys were walking home along the busy street and Lee was carrying his football and sometimes he bounced it on the pavement then suddenly the ball bounced out on to the road and Lee ran after it and he didn’t see the car coming towards him then David heard a bang and he saw Lee lying on the road then David ran into the nearest shop and asked the lady to ‘phone for an ambulance then he went to help his friend and he saw a tall man bending over Lee and he shouted, ”Don’t move him!”
Miss out some of the ands and thens or change them. You could use when, but or so, or choose your own word. |
Too many ands and thens.
to make sentences.
The two boys were walking along the busy street and Lee was carrying his football and sometimes he bounced it on the pavement then suddenly the ball bounced out on to the road and Lee ran after it |
Put capital letters at the start. Put full stops at the end.
Copy the sentences.
the boys walked up the street
lee had his football
he kicked his ball
the ball rolled into the street
lee ran after it
a car hit lee
source http://www.primaryresources.co.uk/english/englishB12.htm
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